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My name is Adriana ,i have 14 years old and i am in 9th grades. I have a shy personality, and i am talkative but mostly embarrassed but i am brave ,tenacious,i am a highly ambitious person, and I will never give up on
anything. So while I still have your attention, I would like to make my
intentions clear on why I should be elected as your class President.I promise that i will be careeful with thing that will happend in our school ,i promise would like everyone to have fun white learning,i will encourage people to help each other and yf you vote for me i won't forbid all phones, I
will be open to any and all ideas,you can count on me and trust me And I promise to help make this first High school year Unforgettable. . My biggest cality is to look on the bright side of the life .Sometimes in my life i was want to give up...but i remind that the life is a beautiful place and on every day day is a new day with a new story.
In our school is a big problem...that is with bad boys who disapointed smart guys from this school. I believe that with all of these traits, I can promote and improve this class. To do this, I will always look out for others by devoting time to their needs. I promise to give detention to those who misbehave, but also give rewards to those who don't. I won't be disappointed in those who make mistakes, but instead, teach them the right and smart thing to do. I am confident that by being class president I can make our class a happier place
If I will be the president ,i promise that i will make that problem to go up.After I am elected, this class will be remembered as tenacious, brave, orderly, and smart. After all a bright class, is the right class. In order to succeed, I need your allegiance and support, for me as class president,
I hope you will vote me! Thank you!

"My name is Adriana, I am 14 years old and in the 9th grade. I have a shy personality, I'm talkative, but mostly embarrassed. However, I am brave ,tenacious, and I am a highly ambitious person. I will never give up on anything. While I still have your attention, I would like to make my intentions clear on why I should be elected as your class President.

I promise that I will be careful with things that are to happen in our school. I promise to make learning fun for everyone. I will encourage people to help each other and if you vote for me, I won't forbid phones from being used on school premises. I will be open to any and all ideas. You can count on and trust me. I promise to help make this first High school year unforgettable. My biggest quality is to look on the bright side of life. There was a time in my life where I wanted to give up...but I remembered that life was a beautiful gift and that everyday is a new day with a new story.

In our school, there are problems....that is with mischievous individuals who disappoint other kids from this school. I believe that with all of these traits, I can promote and improve this class. To do this, I will always look out for others by devoting time for their needs. I promise to give detention to those who misbehave, but also give rewards to those who don't. I won't be disappointed in those who make mistakes, but instead, teach them the right and smart thing to do. I am confident that by being class president, I can make our class a happier, better place.

If I were elected president, I can assure you that no problems are to arise in any way. After I am elected, this class will be remembered as tenacious, brave, orderly, and smart. After all, a bright class is the right class. In order to succeed, I need your allegiance and support for me as class president,

I hope you will vote for me! Thank you!"