show don't tell the following pls: "the party was busy", ""the party was luxurious", "everyone was happy", "the narrator was excited", "a famous singer performed", "something went horribly wrong"
If I get what your trying to say is you want me to put all of that in a sentence.
The party was very busy that night, and let me tell you! Was the best party I went to. It was so luxurious! Even a famous singer preformed! Everyone was so happy about that! But then... something went horribly wrong.....
