Which is the most effective thesis for this essay,
based on its outline?
tably
The key to happiness is having enough money for
food, shelter, and a comfortable life.
To be happy, people must have enough money to
live comfortably and then turn their attention toward
helping others.
To be happy, people must focus completely on
service to others.
Having enough money to live comfortably is very
important, and so is helping others.
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