Identify the problem with the following sentence. A few of the athletes who were not as worried about their weight would sometimes order calorie-laden desserts every now and then.

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The word 'as' should not be in the sentence.
If it must be in the sentence, it would be:

A few of the athletes who were not as worried about their weight as (..........insert a noun here..... ) would sometimes order calorie-laden desserts every now and then.

Alternatively, instead if adding a noun, you could make it:

A few of the athletes who were not as worried about their weight as they should have beenwould sometimes order calorie-laden desserts every now and then.

Hope this helps!

Answer:

USE OF PASSIVE VOICE

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